I'm crazy tired tonight, so the next chapter will have to wait for tomorrow, but ...
I like the idea of spreading the information out, too. Just be careful, then, not to make it sound like a lesson. Some of it may be hard to avoid -- think Giles on Buffy and how he spent so much time delivering the exposition in the library -- but ease it in there. You'll find a way!
Yep, I was going to suggest that the corrections and any edits you want to make get done before you start posting at ffnet. I want you to have as clean a piece as you can. This isn't something you just fired off overnight; I want it to get the attention it deserves. :-)
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I like the idea of spreading the information out, too. Just be careful, then, not to make it sound like a lesson. Some of it may be hard to avoid -- think Giles on Buffy and how he spent so much time delivering the exposition in the library -- but ease it in there. You'll find a way!
Yep, I was going to suggest that the corrections and any edits you want to make get done before you start posting at ffnet. I want you to have as clean a piece as you can. This isn't something you just fired off overnight; I want it to get the attention it deserves. :-)