I'm glad you're enjoying it! This chapter gave me fits over at Fan Nation, and I forgot to update the HTML coding when I edited it at ff.net. So now I've edited a bit of Alan's dialog to make it sound more like him, and for some punctuation bobbles I see now. I'll have to go back and fix that everywhere else!
I'll post chapter 6 a little later. I'm up to chapter 11 in what's finished, and I'm going to start work on chapter 12 tonight.
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Date: 2011-09-01 10:50 pm (UTC)I'll post chapter 6 a little later. I'm up to chapter 11 in what's finished, and I'm going to start work on chapter 12 tonight.